Over the summer, I posted a list of words I banned from my science writing class at Shoals Marine Lab. Readers offered some equally abysmal suggestions. And this fall, teaching a seminar at Yale, I came across some others. I suspect that this list is just going to keep growing. So I’m giving it a home here, where I can add in new entries as they arise in assignments in my classes. You can easily direct people to it through this url: http://bit.ly/IndexBanned (caps required).
By assembling this list, I don’t mean to say that no one should ever use these words. I am not teaching people how to write scientific papers. What I mean is that anyone who wants to learn how to write about science–and to be read by people who aren’t being paid to read–should work hard to learn how to explain science in plain yet elegant English–not by relying on scientific jargon, code-words, deadening euphemisms, or meaningless cliches.
[Update: Here’s a post where I go into more depth about why words matter–along with sentences, paragraphs, etc.]
Access (verb)
And/or (Logic gates do not belong in prose)
Anomalous
Anthropogenic
Breakthrough (unless you are covering Principia Mathematica)
Captive observation
Clinical setting
Community ecology (this ban does not extend to the subject of community ecology)
Component
Context
Cracked the code (especially when it comes to sequencing DNA. DNA is not the same thing as the genetic code)
Demographic leveling
Elucidate
et al
Facilitate
Food source (when just “food” will do)
Forcings
“Further research is needed” (or anything like that)
Holy Grail
Immunocompromised
Impacted (unless you’re talking about teeth or bowels)
In (when used in phrases like “experiments in mouse“)
In vitro
In vivo
Informed (people can be informed. As for “The discussion was informed…”? Ack.)
Insult (referring to an injury)
Interaction
Interdisciplinary
Interface (especially as a verb)
Intermediate host
Interested in (as in, “Dr. Frankenstein is interested in tissue regeneration.” Transforms passion and excitement into a boring parlor game)
It has been shown (noxious in many ways)
Literally (even if it’s used accurately, the word is generally useless)
Marine environment
Material properties
Mechanism
Methodology
Miracle (or Miracle cure)
Missing link (don’t get me started…)
Mitigation
Modulate
Molecular systematists
Morphology
Multiple (as in many? Then just use many)
Musty (when referring to museum collections, unless those collections are in fact in an attic with holes in the roof through which rain steadily falls)
Non-marine environment
Novel (the adjective is banned. The noun, as in War and Peace, is fine.)
Optimum
Orthogonal
Paradigm shift
Parameter (also, parameterize)
Pathogenicity
Phylogenetics
Predation
Predator-Prey Relationship
Processes
Proxies
Recently (when you actually mean “ten years ago”)
Recruit, recruitment (unless you’re writing about the Army)
Regime (unless you’re referring to Mobutu in Zaire)
Robust (as in, robust data. But robust wine? Yes, please.)
Scientists have learned in recent years that… (A dodge to escape explaining what actually happened)
Seminal
Sociopolitical
Substrate [try things like dirt, mud, rock, etc.]
Sustainability
System (as in, “He chose mouse as a system to study”)
This (if there is no antecedent in sight)
Transmissibility
Trivial (in the way scientists like to use it: “This problem is trivial.” Non-trivialis even worse.)
Utilize
Via
Virulence
We (as in “We now know the fatality ratio of the current H1N1 influenza epidemic.” We includes your readers, most of whom don’t know–yet.)
